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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
Are you particularly concerned with flow of action? Because panels 2 and 3 aren't well-linked. Interestingly, the page layout would still work if you flipped the entire page along the horizontal... p2 becomes p1, and you're given a pause between the cartwheel and the kick that fills in the time between the two where she would have compressed and changed direction. In addition, you'd change the direction of the reader's eyes flowing from left to right, so that they're following in the direction of the action which helps give it a sense of full-page flow.
Unless you're laying out the pages to read right-left? Since you're using English in the text I presumed you're panel-to-panel flow is left-right, same as the language, but I could be mistaken.
It's pretty sweet work just the same. You're throwing everything fun into the stewpot, huh? Space pirates, mecha, fighting, cheesecake... how many pages are you going for?
I don't have a page count, nor a story for that matter. I just make it up as I go.